This is a really nice piece. I like the shading on the objects as well as the textures. The only thing that might improve this is adding more detail to the cloth.
Sydney- You have a GREAT start to this piece but it is not yet fully resolved. I would clean-up the one-point perspective as it is just a bit off (I can help you with this in class) and like Ross, I would want to see the fabric developed more fully for this assignment. I also think you can add some mark-making in the window to allude to space - even if it is very vague. Overall, however, you should feel confident that you can pull this piece off!
Great job! I think you could add a little more to it. Could you smooth out your lines? that would help to show depth and 3-D affects i think. good job syd.
This is a really nice piece. I like the shading on the objects as well as the textures. The only thing that might improve this is adding more detail to the cloth.
ReplyDeleteSydney- You have a GREAT start to this piece but it is not yet fully resolved. I would clean-up the one-point perspective as it is just a bit off (I can help you with this in class) and like Ross, I would want to see the fabric developed more fully for this assignment. I also think you can add some mark-making in the window to allude to space - even if it is very vague. Overall, however, you should feel confident that you can pull this piece off!
ReplyDeleteGreat job! I think you could add a little more to it. Could you smooth out your lines? that would help to show depth and 3-D affects i think. good job syd.
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